ROUGH CUT 2

This morning we worked on shortening the film opening on imovie. We were able to shorten it from 3 minutes to 2 minutes 27 seconds. we did this by deleting unnecessary clips (for example the chicken man scene) 

I then asked my brother for feedback and he said that he liked the pan shot of the images which show the characters friendship and the bathroom scene (the one shot scene). However he said that we needed to add more sound effects which we will do through premiere. He said this because the jump scare is not what usually scares him, but the music that creates this build up of tension is what scares him.

After asking Enid she suggested that we should get rid of the front alley way shot because the actress's facial expression broke the tension that was being created. Another thing we had to work on was explaining their relationship as it was quite confusing (friends - to enemy). We will improve this by retaking the pan shot and by scribbling/tearing each picture - making it darker and also timelapse the clock. She also suggested that we should add a layer on top - burning the picture to the first scene to make it darker to set a clear atmosphere.